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  <title>confetti thoughts</title>
  <subtitle>virgomoon</subtitle>
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    <name>virgomoon</name>
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  <updated>2024-07-06T14:01:56Z</updated>
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    <title>things to improve in writing [note to self]</title>
    <published>2024-07-06T14:01:56Z</published>
    <updated>2024-07-06T14:01:56Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">&lt;b&gt;writing texture&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;- plot (masha does this extremely well like she quickly hits character notes then gets into plot as well its fascinating to me) &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;for this i will attempt to write a little silly piece of detective fiction - nothing like a mystery to learn how to Plot &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;- characterisation &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;i am decent ish at this i believe but my two biggest enemies are 1. how to name people 2. how to make people bad. people are all bad and good but i lean a bit too much into the goodness and not enough into the murkiness. the murkiness doesn't mean NOIR it just means how people are in reality. real stuff! i really want to get real. like how the narrator of WTNV takes you unawares when he suddenly turns racist. Ryoko Kui is excellent at this. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;- tone&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;i don't think i'm bad at tone, just that my tone gets a little... samey. it's not bad but i think my samey isn't the same as my favourite authors and their samey. their samey rules. mine is a little stale. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;for this i think just practicing flash pieces will work. need to source ideas &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;writing forms&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;- longer lengths&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;write more than 3-5k words, PLEASE. let us aim at 15k words... lol. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;- other formats than fiction and non-fiction &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;such as twine, experimental writing, poetry. my goal is to try and create a chapbook this year and a interactive fiction piece&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;will update when i think of more but these are already pretty big holes that i've known about forever except i want to do something about these now systematically&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=virgomoon&amp;ditemid=14846" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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    <title>[list] writing to-do</title>
    <published>2023-07-04T09:29:09Z</published>
    <updated>2023-07-04T09:29:09Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">My round-up post is 1k words and counting, before I can post it here I have to do some housecleaning. List is in order of priority.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;gt; &lt;b&gt;animefeminist article&lt;/b&gt;: wish they'd pay a little bit more than they do but what they do is already a lot [TAXATION WILL REDUCE IT THO &amp;gt;:(] anyway i must finish writing this over the weekend (which is the new month????)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;gt; &lt;b&gt;bojack horseman fic&lt;/b&gt;: sans the fact that i relate to diane on an interplanetary level; her pain, her life trajectory, her passion, her dejection, her empathy, her ability to really, really hurt you where it matters... sans all this, i really love futurefics, and her life trajectory according to the show made me feel so happy and so serene. i want to explore that. i was looking up houston climate and cultural specificities, transport, people, housing, etcetera. i kind of really want to write this. it might be cathartic for me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;gt; &lt;b&gt;skip and loafer fic&lt;/b&gt;: i need not say more but i have these WIPs i am endlessly fond of but have no clue how to execute (or end) without seeming a little... pander-y? But i will write it because no one else can write what i can write. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://virgomoon.dreamwidth.org/12567.html#cutid1"&gt;just vague thoughts about stuff&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=virgomoon&amp;ditemid=12567" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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